GREAT WEBSITES: The Purple Crayon

Occasionally, I like to mention great websites and blogs that I enjoy reading, which leads to Harold Underdown’s website (including his blog), The Purple Crayon. This website is so full of information that it’ll make your head whirl. You’ll find articles on all aspects of children’s writing and publishing. And what’s really great about it is that Harold is such a nice fellow. I had the pleasure of meeting him at an SCBWI summer conference one year (for more details on this year’s conference, click here).

Harold Underdown has been on the editorial side of the business for many years and is the author of The Complete Idiot’s Guide to Publishing Children’s Books. He is warm, friendly and takes time to respond to questions or comments. He’s just one of those “all-around nice guys”–and it’s reflected in his website.

He recently posted a fascinating article on the Acquisition Process, which clearly explains WHY it takes so long for most editors to respond to our submissions. If you find yourself tapping your foot or feeling forgotten, read the article and you’ll feel better–or at least you’ll understand why you aren’t getting that snappy response you’d hoped for.

Happy reading!

How Do I Get Published?

This is a common question authors get from writers who dream of being published someday. The problem is there’s no magic bullet. And no simple answer. Getting published takes tremendous work and dedication, and sometimes even a bit of luck. A writer and his/her work needs nurturing and time, like planting a seed, caring for it, and watching it grow into a healthy beautiful plant that gives oxygen back to the world.

Asking a published writer the name of their editor won’t help you (and is not included in “Miss Manners Etiquette Guide for Children’s Writers”—okay, I just made that up, but isn’t it a great idea?). Neither will being pushy with an editor, or mass-submitting your manuscript to every children’s editor you can find. The fact is it all takes time. You didn’t step from high school into your current job position you’re in today. It took time to develop your skills through education and experience.

So what’s the best piece of advice for a new children’s writer? It’s your lucky day, because I’m going to give you a “two-for” (two for the price of one, which in this case, is free).

First, learn your craft. Take classes, read how-to books, read the genre you want to write. Write that first draft then revise it until you can’t change one more word. Put it away for a month then see if you still feel the same way.

The second piece of advice—and this is the yardstick I use for serious writers vs. those who dream about it—join the Society of Children’s Book Writers & Illustrators (SCBWI). When you join, you’ll receive a fabulous handbook filled with so much information it will make your head whirl. They have two annual conferences (summer in LA, winter in NY). They provide a terrific networking opportunity for their members, guidance on writing, and realistic information on the marketing your work, once you’re at that point. Regional chapters offer workshops, retreats and one-day events, all related to writing for children. You can be involved as much or as little as you choose, but there’s something to be said for participating and developing camaraderie with other children’s writers.

The road to publication has its potholes, turns and detours. We all have to find our way through, but first learning how to drive (developing the craft) and having the SCBWI as a roadmap will make your trip much more pleasant!

Staying Connected

Yesterday I attended a Ventura/Santa Barbara SCBWI Workshop in Bakersfield, “Finding and Capturing an Agent”, with guest speaker Erin Murphy. As usual, Ms. Murphy was very personable and shared her terrific insights on being an agent. I love speakers who make you feel like you’re sitting at the kitchen table (or Starbucks), chatting over a cup of coffee–and Ms. Murphy does just that.

The other great thing about the day was the “connection factor” that comes with attending writing events. I love meeting new members, putting faces with my cyber-friends (via our listserve) and of course, seeing my old friends. This is just as valuable to me as any other part of the day. I wanted to jump up and cheer when Ms. Murphy complimented my friends’ writing and I loved seeing the faces of people when they heard her say positive things about their work. There’s nothing like being validated, especially in this business. It’s simply uplifting!

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Rejections Part II: Don’t Let ‘Em Drive You Crazy

Rejection letters are a popular topic to discuss amongst writers. So many aspects to cover—how to cope with them, what they mean, what to do with them, which room to wallpaper with them… They can drive you crazy!

When I first started writing–no, submitting–a wise writer at an SCBWI conference (whose name escapes me) said, “There are different kinds of rejections.” She further explained that moving up the ‘rejection ladder’ is a good thing. My husband says I’m nuts for being happy over a rejection letter. Well, first off, I’m never happy to get a rejection letter. Period. But certain letters do initiate a feeling of encouragement in me. And that’s what I look for. Is there something in that letter that I can gain (something for the next submission or something as simple as feeling encouraged about my work). What is the positive aspect of that letter? How can it help me?

Here’s what I’ve learned about rejection letters (what I prefer to call “letters of decline”) in climbing the rejection ladder:

1) Bottom rung: A form letter. Usually comes on a piece of paper so small that you wonder why they even bothered (although I applaud their efforts in saving paper and helping the environment). Not much to learn from here, except that if you accumulate a few of these for the same body of work, you need to go back, seriously review your work, and revise.

2) 2nd rung: Form letter with your name inserted. The positive aspect: They got your name right and you know it was indeed your ms they passed on. Same as above: if you get a lot of these on the same material, seriously review and revise. Seriously.

3) 3rd rung: Form letter with a handwritten word or two scribbled somewhere on the page, such as “Nice work” or “Not quite.” Positive aspect: A busy editor took the time to give you some encouragement. You’re doing something right!

4) 4th rung: Typed letter that includes a specific reference to your ms, such as, “Thank you for considering us for THE ABCS OF DESERT ANIMALS.” The letter might even have comments such as, “While your descriptions of the desert are quite lovely…” Positive aspect: This editor took the time to give you comments. Your work has something that piqued his/her interest. Advice: Put the letter away for a week or so, then go back and read it again. Try to understand what he/she meant (this can be tough with phrases like, “Too slight” or “A sense of disconnect.”

5) 5th rung: A personal letter that includes specific suggestions for improving your work. Positive aspect: This editor liked your work but for some reason had to decline it. As in #4 above, put away, go back later, and re-read (when you’re less emotional about it).

6) 6th rung: A personal letter with revision suggestions and a request to see your work after the revisions. Positive aspect: You have his/her attention. THIS IS GOLD! Take your time to do the revisions. Don’t rush. Editors expect you to take your time in making revisions.

7) 7th rung: An acceptance letter. An acceptance usually comes in the form of a phone call, but occasionally it comes via a letter. Congratulations! Only 1% of the thousands of annual submissions receive a personal response from an editor, and of those responses, only 1% are acceptances, so this is a fantastic accomplishment.

So there you have it. My take on the rejection ladder. And you might wonder which room I wallpaper with my many, many, many rejections (see photo). I don’t. I put them in a folder (by year) labeled, “Learning Experiences.”

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Greatest Goofiest Jokes Meets Mt. Rushmore

Where do famous presidents sleep soundly?
Mount Rush-snore.
Okay, that one was for Tina Nichols Coury, author of the upcoming picture book, HANGING OFF JEFFERSON’S NOSE. Tina is one of those kidlit folks that I’m jealous of (but in a nice way). She does amazing illustrations AND she can write. A double-talent! She took a trip to Mt. Rushmore a few years ago and became fascinated with it. Her passion and enthusiam resulted in her upcoming book. Her blog has tons of info on Mt. Rushmore, art and all kinds of cool things. Speaking of which…
Tina was kind enough to interview me for her blog. For anyone interested–and I know there are millions…perhaps billions of you :-} — mosey on over to her site for a look.

And for All of You Introverts…

Authors Mary Hershey and Robin LaFevers have a great new blog, Shrinking Violets Promotions, for those of us who consider ourselves as introverts. Definitely check it out.

What I find so intriguing about their site is that when I read about it, I immediately–with no hesitation–thought, YEA! Something for us shy folks. If you know me, you might laugh at that comment, but the fact is, I used to be deathly shy as a child. I’ve worked hard my entire adult life at overcoming it but it’s still a part of me, so I’m looking forward to visiting their site often.

The number one fear of most Americans is public speaking and the number two fear is death. I think they’ve picked a winning idea. Way to go, ladies!

The Rocky Road of Writing for Children (Rejections, Part 1)

Last weekend my husband and I took a drive up the Alabama Hills, near Lone Pine, CA. If you’ve never been to this area, it’s known for three things:

1) It’s the gateway to Mt. Whitney (the highest point in the lower 48 states, at 14,496.811 feet).
2) The nearby Alabama Hills (where almost every ambush scene from every spaghetti western ever made was filmed but is now a popular rock climbing area).
3) The Lone Pine earthquake of 1872 (where the eastern Sierra was uplifted ten feet in one shot, which all but decimated the town of Lone Pine).

I went there with my husband to learn how to use my new camera. There’s nothing like the Sierras for great photo-ops. After scouring the Alabama Hills we drove up to Whitney Portal (where the road ends and real hikers are tested). As we wound our way up the road, we had to weave our way through a sea of fallen rocks. Time and weather naturally wears away at the landscape. And that got me to thinking…

I love rocks. I always have. Their textures, colors, weights, shapes and unique properties have always fascinated me. I even squeal in excitement when I discover an interesting specimen. Okay, maybe that’s just a weird thing to know about me, but this will relate to writing. I promise.

Winding up that road to Whitney Portal, I realized that the rocks scattered amongst the road were a little like rejection letters. Initially, both are seen as big old obstacles, but if you take a close look at them, they have something to offer—a beautiful treasure worth discovering. Are there shining crystals or a revision suggestion or two? A texture to run your fingers over or a tone that expresses hope and encouragement? Was there a shower of rocks or one humongous boulder that landed with a crash? Some rejection letters are like the latter, casting the writer into a mountain of self-doubt. But once you roll the dang thing over and take a hard look at it, you realize that there was a good reason for you to be right there, at that exact moment in time, for that boulder to land near you. Blessings come in all kinds of disguises.

I’ve had showers of rejections trickle down on me, but I’ve only had an occasional rejection boulder land on me—and it hurts! But thanks to my circle of writing friends (AKA, the writing version of Search and Rescue), I survived it and once again continued my journey down the road of writing for children.

Safe journeys to weary travelers & Watch for Falling Rocks!

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Alice Pope’s Blog

I’m fairly new to blogging, but I’m finding that one of my favorite blogs is that of Alice Pope (Alice is the editor of the “Children’s Writer’s and Illustrator’s Market”–the bible for children’s writers and illustrators).

Just this week Ms. Pope posted a couple of outstanding links on her blog. She posted a tantalizing teaser for her new book “The Guide to Literary Agents” and yesterday she gave a link to an NPR interview with Susan Patron (author of Newbery Winner, “The Higher Power of Lucky.”

You really should check them out!

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Easy Readers: The Bridge to Successful Reading

Okay folks, I’m warning you—I’m getting on my soapbox about easy readers (which I will refer to as EZs, because…well, I don’t feel like typing it out).

EZ readers are that little genre of book where you learned to read. Remember, “See Spot run.” (I know I just dated myself). These books carry children over the bridge from dependent reading (having picture books read to them) to independent reading (reading chapter books on their own). I believe this is the MOST important genre in literature because it is here that children learn to either embrace or avoid reading. It’s also the most overlooked and endangered genre in children’s literature, in this author’s opinion.

How? Sadly, the industry itself often overlooks this genre. The next time you come across a children’s writing contest, look at the categories. They’re typically: Young Adult, Middle Grade, Picture Book, and either Poetry or Non-Fiction. I say “typically” because I’m fortunate that my regional SCBWI chapter includes an “Easy Reader/Chapter Book” category in their annual writing contest for our regional Writer’s Day. Many children’s writing contests do not.

What about awards for published books? Again, the categories are usually the same. With the exception of the ALA’s Theodore Geisel Award, and the Gryphon Award, EZs are generally not recognized in the awards arena—even though this is what most K-2 children are reading. Have we forgotten to honor books for this age group? Are these books any less important?

Getting to the matter of endangerment, let’s look at what’s happening to the genre itself. In today’s trade market, more and more of these books are about licensed characters (I could wallpaper my office with rejection letters that say, “We are moving our easy reader line toward licensed characters.”). Now, don’t get me wrong—I like Mickey Mouse just as much as the next girl. However, when an editor turns down a carefully crafted manuscript (one that considers a child’s reading needs according to his age, grade and ability) to leave room for yet another version of Spiderman or Sponge Bob Square Pants, I have to question what’s happening.

Many licensed character books don’t seem to be written with a child’s reading needs in mind. This is just wrong. In fact, often children’s writers do not write these books at all. Rather, they’re written “in-house,” meaning editorial staff determines the storyline and the staff then assigns the project to a regular (in-house) writer or an editor. I have no problem with this process–IF the books are well written. Too many times, I’ve picked up licensed character books and found words that are too difficult for a child to read, difficult words that don’t match the illustrations, or too much text for a young child to tackle.

The bottom line for publishing houses may mean big sales (we do live in a pop-culture society), but for the child, the result can be frustration. And when a child is frustrated, he often gives up. Is this really what we want? Of course not. We want children to love reading. As children’s literature professionals, it is our duty and our responsibility to create books that will help children cross the EZ reader bridge with success.

(Please scroll down to see my recommended reading list for Easy Readers–on the right side)

Books to Snuggle Up With

It’s a rainy Monday morning in the California desert. A welcome break from our clear cerulean skies. Weather like this takes me back to my childhood in Seattle. I spent many days there snuggled down with a good book. With this on my mind, it occurred to me that I don’t have list of my favorite books on my blog. As my writer friend says, “Bad writer! Bad writer! No writing kibbles for you!” I knew I had to remedy the situation.

I’ve composed three lists of my favorite children’s books (on the right, scroll down). Some are old, some are new, some are borrowed, but none makes me blue.

Enjoy!